本篇为自我介绍，麻烦查询是不是有不妥之处。后附中文。
Dear professors, good morning
My name is XXX. I am a fresh student from Weifang Medical College.In this preliminary examination of entrance examination for Postgraduates，I am the second inthe major I applied. Im very honored to enter the second round exam and have a chance to introduce myself.
During my undergraduate course, I have a serious attitude towards learning, and my score is TOP 15% in the grade. My college learning experience has improved my ability of independent learning and made me have a clearer understanding of my learning motivation.
I have also participated in student affairs, including organizing cultural and recreational activities and coordinating works. This experience has improved my communication ability and enabled me to cooperate with others better to solve problems .
I know that self state is the key to efficiency, so I pay attention to my state of mind and adjust myself through rational analysis, by this I can manage anxiety better and have a stronger heart.
Im very interested in hematology and immunology, willing to devote myself to scientific research, and the contact with patient in my internship has deepened my sympathy for patients with blood diseases. I hope I can make any contribution to the progress of diagnosis and treatment of blood diseases, so I sincerely hope to become a hematologist.
If I have the chance to study for a masters degree, I will complete the study of clinical knowledge well, keep up with the latest research trends, improve my scientific research ability, and prepare for applying and studying for a doctors degree.
Thank you for listening. I have finished introducing myself.
尊敬的各位教授，上午好
我叫XXX，本科潍坊医学院，应届生，本次考研初试成绩在本专业排名第二。我非常荣幸能进入复试，有一个自我介绍的机会。
本科期间我的学习习惯认真，成绩在本年级前15％，大学的学习历程提升了我自主学习的能力，也让我对我们的学习动机有了更了解的认识。
我还参与了学生工作，包含组织文娱活动与协调工作的拓展，该历程提升了我的交流能力，使我能更好的与人合作解决问题。
我了解自己状况是效率的重点，因此我关注我们的心态，并通过理性剖析来自我调节，所以我能更好解决焦虑，也有更强大的内心。
我对血液学、免疫学非常有兴趣，想投身科学研究，而且在实习中我与患者接触的历程，愈加深了我对血液病病人的同情，我期望我可以为血液病诊疗的进步做任何贡献，因此我真诚期望可以进入该行业。
假如我有机会攻读硕士，我会好好完成临床常识的学习，并紧跟前沿研究动态，同时提升我们的科研能力，为考试报名、攻读博士学位做筹备。
感谢聆听，我的自我介绍完毕了。
Dear professors,
Good morning！
My name is XXX. I am agraduating student from Weifang Medical College.In this years national entrance examination for postgraduate ，Iranked number twointhe major I applied for. Im very honored to enter the second round exam and have a chance to introduce myself.
During my undergraduate course, I have had a serious attitude towards learning, and my average score is among the TOP 15% in the grade. My college learning experience has improved my abilityin independent learning and made me have a clearer understanding of my learning motivation.
I have also participated in student affairs, including organizing cultural and recreational activities and coordinating various matters. This experience has improved my communication ability and enabled me to better cooperate with others to solve problems.
I know that self-state is the key to efficiency, so I pay attention to my state of mind and adjust myself through rational analysis. By this I can manage anxiety better and have a stronger heart.
Im very interested in hematology and immunology,and Im willing to devote myself to scientific research. The contact with patientsduring my internship has deepened my sympathy forthose with blood diseases. I hope I can makesome contribution to the progressin thediagnosis and treatment of blood diseases, so I sincerely hope to become a hematologist.
If I have the chance to study for a masters degree, I willdo my best inthe study of clinical knowledge, keep up with the latest research trends, improve my scientific research ability, and prepare for applying and studying for a doctors degree.
Thank you for listening. I have finished introducing myself.
总体很好，语法结构正确，行文较为流畅。做了少许改动，仅供参考。
